I wrote this song last night, let me know what you think. When I've made enough new songs, I intend to pick the best and record them properly for an album, so your input is much appreciated!
When I was younger I wanted to dance with you,
I wanted romance too,
Oooh I wanted, ooh ooh I wanted you.
She said I could be an astronaut if I wanted to,
You could be a millionaire if you really care,
Oh yeah, oooooh yeah.
When I was 18, she was a beauty queen,
She was pretty and fiesty but obscenely mean,
but oooh I wanted you.
The beauty queen's a dreamer, but her dreams are my nightmares,
She's certainly a lady, drunk falling down my stairs,
Oh no, ooooooh ooooh no.
She said I could be an astronaut if I wanted to,
You could be a millionaire if you really care,
Oh yeah, oooooh yeah.
The girl in the polka dot dress is the one I want,
The way that she doesn't care, the way that she does her hair,
She knows how to play the game and to entertain,
And when it's late at might, she gives me a gentle bite,
Oooooh no.... oohhh nooo.
Now I'm older I don't want romance no more,
I just want to dance some more,
Ooooh I want ya, ooooh I want you.
I am proud of you:) the ability to show the progress is the most important even in arts. Waiting for the CD;)
ReplyDeleteCan we have a signed photograph?? Nice song! I like!
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ReplyDeleteJulide Oral: wow, look at u, singer, songwriter. Great stuff :o)
Mohammed Imran: Awesome, really liked your song. I hope to get your album sooooon ;)